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Firstly, I must stress that I'm no expert at charcoal drawings and whenever I've used charcoal I've felt that there was a lot I could improve on.
What I really like about this is the crispness of it. It's well blended and I like how you've done the hair.
What I think could be slightly better is her lips. They just seem slightly off centre. I appreciate that no face is entirely centralised or symmetrical though. Also, her eyes don't seem to be quite in line with each other. Either one is slightly too high or one is slightly too low. Once again, I do appreciate that faces aren't perfectly symmetrical but something about the eyes doesn't seem quite right.
Anyway, I really do like this picture overall and hope you consider my criticism as constructive.
Keep up the good work.
What I really like about this is the crispness of it. It's well blended and I like how you've done the hair.
What I think could be slightly better is her lips. They just seem slightly off centre. I appreciate that no face is entirely centralised or symmetrical though. Also, her eyes don't seem to be quite in line with each other. Either one is slightly too high or one is slightly too low. Once again, I do appreciate that faces aren't perfectly symmetrical but something about the eyes doesn't seem quite right.
Anyway, I really do like this picture overall and hope you consider my criticism as constructive.
Keep up the good work.